How to seek the fury of the sea
How to know the moods of the wind
When he left, he didn't tell me
That the stronger you are
The more you win.
They come and go
The people you love,
The people you give
The will to sail away,
To survive and wish again.
Forever you'll be the one
To look into the sea
To find the one meaning
Of that which will never be.
Ask the wind to take you back
Tell the rain to hold its wrath
Yell at those who could not see
The tornado raging deep
Ravaging
The beauty of your sea
The one that will never be
But a storm of tears
of joy
and overcome fears.
Ce poème est absolument magnifique!
RépondreSupprimerI have to agree with Kindred.
RépondreSupprimerAbsolutely magnificent and beautiful.
I wish you can post more. ♥
Yes - I found this a strong poem with momentum that pulls you through it to the end. I like the way you contrast the questioning and seeking with the strength of the storm, and then the storm becomes you (I think).
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I can only agree with the ladies!
RépondreSupprimerPoignant, vivant, maginifique.
Lovely poem-glad I had a chance to read this.I love the form-it is so easy and the words are deep as if you are describing Life itself-those questions keep haunting us .Don't they?
RépondreSupprimerthis is so powerful...such beauty in pain....adore this piece
RépondreSupprimerThank you so much everyone, I feel like it went straight through to all of you
RépondreSupprimerThis is absolutely wonderful, so much emotional depth
RépondreSupprimerpowerful delivery of sadness.
RépondreSupprimerbless you.
A very thought-provoking poem.
RépondreSupprimerLove your ending.
Nicely done!
Wow!Wow! and A Wow Again...terrific expression...
RépondreSupprimeryes, everything above and more! how many of us feel that way? buried deep inside?
RépondreSupprimerAsk the wind to take you back
RépondreSupprimerTell the rain to hold its wrath
Yell at those who could not see
The tornado raging deep
- What an outrageous storm that. Hidden in every one of us at some point! Keep writing.
"They come and go
RépondreSupprimerThe people you love,
The people you give
The will to sail away" my favorite lines. Sadness in its most loveliest forms.Beautiful!
Very positive a verse. Keeping your spirits high in the time of a storm is a great thing to achieve. Good luck!
RépondreSupprimerPuplumages is Purvi :)
I am from ~
http://puplumages.wordpress.com/2011/05/27/laments-on-the-loss-of-love/
I like this a lot.
RépondreSupprimerI've just started a poetry blog, too:
www.anotherteenpoet.wordpress.com
Nature so often depicts purely human feelings. Love the feel of the sea. Nice!
RépondreSupprimerlove it!my fav line is " the beauty of your sea..the one that will never be. " happy rally!
RépondreSupprimerBeautiful lines! happy rally!
RépondreSupprimerTo me this describes the storms within us all--the struggle that challenges us day to day. Beautifully expressed--thank you.
RépondreSupprimerThank you for that. I like how your emotions are as mixed-up and uncontrollable as the ocean itself.
RépondreSupprimerNicely expressed..'The storm'
RépondreSupprimerAlcina
The power of your poem, as is the sea, is immense. Thanks for sharing :)
RépondreSupprimera very powerful and beautiful piece.
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