I've forgotten the warmth,
The feel of the sun.
The shine of the light,
A fire long gone,
Yet I burn for the touch,
Of beauty alone.
I've imagined the doom,
The words in our eyes.
The weights of our smiles,
And some other lies,
Yet I burn from the tears,
Of all silent cries.
I've forsaken the rights,
The will of surrender.
The fragments of life,
The hope for power.
But I burn for the growth
Of a blooming flower.
I still love the "positivity" twist in the end.
RépondreSupprimerThe fragments of life,
The hope for power.
But I burn for the growth
Of a blooming flower.
Touching and very honest words.
PSycho Babbling Basher, aren't you proud of the positive twist? :P
RépondreSupprimerbrilliant with a surprise end...love it
RépondreSupprimerHi Diablesse,
RépondreSupprimerVery nice motivational poem , I really liked the way you gone with the flow from the very pain to the self strengthening , and not just getting stuck to self but look around to always help those in need.
Lovely ..
Take care.
keep smiling :)
Hi vivek,
RépondreSupprimerWelcome back! I find it a little creepy that you just said three very true things abt me :)
welcome, we are closed, I added you to #201, let us know after you finish 18 poets visiting...
RépondreSupprimerAnother very touching poem mixing sadness and hope, pain and light - life is a journey through wich we progress and it is this strengh we feel at the end of the poem that bring a smile on the face.
RépondreSupprimerI like it.
this was beautiful, with some wonderful images! good to see you at the Rally, hope you make it more earlier next time too :)
RépondreSupprimerRally Week 41 - My Poetry
Hello diablesse,
RépondreSupprimerI will try to link up some of your posts when I get them.
I can also try to get more page views for you through the Coffee shop Forum. If you have some extra time, you can check out the Google Forum Options where you can post the link to your Blogs.
That way, people who love Poetry will have the chance to see your work. They will not regret it.
Plus you have a good number of followers now, and that's great. :D
Great poem. I really enjoyed it! I like your imagery.
RépondreSupprimerJ.R.
Thank you so much to all of you;
RépondreSupprimeryour nice comments and psycho fr your help
keep sharing, welcome join poets rally week 42, have fun!
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How are you?
RépondreSupprimerPlease consider making a contribution to poets rally week 43 today,
A free verse is appreciated, you rock!
Happy Friday!
Hope to see you in!
Happy Mother’s Day to Moms in your family.
xoxox
missed your absence.
Wow I really love all of your writing! So awesome.
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