Try to catch
The glimpse of gold
The fleeting shine
Of darting Love.
Try to see
Lost in the stars
The cold universe
Of healing scars.
Try to halt
The forever time
The painful joy
Of hearts like mine.
Try it all
The ailing pain
The invisible ache
Of misery's reign.
tender
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and beautifully written
beautiful, but so sad I can relate to this poem: thanks for sharing your sensitivity
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RépondreSupprimerLove the "try" focus.
Worth a "TRY" all the time. Poignant.
RépondreSupprimerA lovely poem. It sounds reflectively peaceful and reminds me of the title of my blog.
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hmmm...Cam late..but yeah read each poem of your...they all were equally catchy and lovely..
RépondreSupprimerPowerful & a drop of hope in those lines. Love is always worth to try, despite the scars and hurts it carries on the way.
RépondreSupprimerAs usual a lovely poem I really enjoy to read.
Thank you to all of you for you nice comments
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