She Dared
Obscured by the light
Entranced by the night.
She Stared
Thinking of the day
Wondering off her way.
She Teared
Up the life of plans
Falling into hands.
She Feared
Their ticking racing
Slowly destroying.
She Cared
For all lost moments
Long gone instants.
She Bared
Her precious memories
Threw them in the sea.
She Cleared
Mind of all times
Burden to all kind.
I really like the form of this poem. "She Cared
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" is especially meaningful to me. Well done.
Thank you Judy for visiting my blog :)
RépondreSupprimerIt does feel good to liberate ourself sometimes of the emotional weights.
RépondreSupprimerVery poignant and meaningful. Great!
Beautiful words. Makes me feel quite sad yet uplifted at the same time :)
RépondreSupprimerAbsolutely exquisite poem!
RépondreSupprimerI love the rhythm :)
Excellent writing. It is one of the best healers. God Bless
RépondreSupprimerHi, this is sad but its good for you to write. You are sharing your soul and that is good also to know others read and connect with your words.
RépondreSupprimerI will confess to all of you that im having a harder time writting these days, im unsure why but it sucks :(
RépondreSupprimerLove the way you rhymes :) Beautiful poem.
RépondreSupprimerStrange as it may sound,this poem has a feel-good quality o it.I guess it's the liberating aspect of it that's so alluring.Beautifully written!
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