lundi 7 mars 2011

Burn and Write

Write without thinking,                                      
Words accusing                                              
Pointing at life and denouncing                          
Freedom of our minds                                      
Blindness of our hearts.                                    
Try to scream                                                  
Understand the feeling                                    
Resisting.                                                          
You want to know,                                        
You want to feel                                              
Touch the sun
Change it's color
Burn your soul
Rest forever.
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6 commentaires:

  1. Psycho Babbling Basher7 mars 2011 à 21:06

    You are onto something there. And that's eloquent. Very relevant.

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  2. Kush8 mars 2011 à 01:11

    nice poem, v honest

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  3. Anonyme8 mars 2011 à 01:14

    Really like the rythme of the poem. Look like it comes from the bottom of your heart.

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  4. Diablesse8 mars 2011 à 09:39

    I write best when i don't overthink it. It has to come form within.
    Thank you Marie,
    Thank you Rett (come visit more often)
    and thanks Psycho Babbling Basher :)

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  5. dead-girl16 mars 2011 à 10:51

    this is it i can totally relate to your way of writing. its perfect......

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  6. Diablesse16 mars 2011 à 20:30

    its one of my favorite, i'm so happy you like it

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